Blog #4

Ethan Baker-
Ethan you did a very good job with the piece of music you selected. It describes your blog very well. You made the mood of the blog very easy to understand. When you were using the very specific words i could see a picture in my mind of what you were talking about.You had very little if not any mistakes in your blog. I'm looking forward to your next blog. I might even check out the book. When you get done withthe book could you tell me so that i can check it out? Thanks.

 Chardonnay Bennet-
  I liked the piece of music you selected to represent your blog. It brings about a lot of emotions.It definently does a good job of explaining your blog.You also did a good job expressing you self in the blog and explaining how your piece of music connected with your book.You had some minor things that needed to be corrected in your blog like run-on sentences but overall you did well. What was the name of your blog again? I just wanted to know because it sounds pretty interesting.

Yair-Yair, you did a pretty good job. You had some minor problems but you did a good job. Your piece of music expresses the blog perfectly.It was kind of hard to fully get the full affect of what you were trying to say because of the spelling errors and the improper language. When you are writing or typing you have to make sure that you have all you're words spelled correctly and you are using correct language. Otherwise it's kind of hard for the reader to fully understand the point you are trying to get across.