Response on first quarter blog.
In my first quarter blog I had very little mistakes. I followed the criteria and made sure everything was there. I was very satisfied. I had only two things that I was upset about was that my blog turned out to be out of order and a little disorganized. Also my trailer didn't make people want to read my book. I was pretty upset with the results of my Animoto but if i was ever to do it again i would know exactly what to do with it. Overall i was pretty impressed with my first quarter blog project.
When I first came into the world of blogging i thought it was going to be another one of those boring,hard, and stressful projects. But as i went with all the way to the end, it actually became a pretty fun and interesting experience. My favorite part of my blogging experience would be just giving feedback on what i read so far. I feel like when I was blogging about it, a movie would pop up in my head about what i had read so far. It was an amazing experience. Another thing I enjoyed about the blogging project was the animoto.It gave me an chance to really express the book. In the end, have learned to appreciate the PRIVILEGES of blogging on blogspot.com
By Starting of this first blog I would like to Introduce the new book I will be reading and blogging about for second quarter blog. " KING OF THE MILD FRONTIER" a biography by Chris Crutcher. I would like to start off with a brief preview of what i read so far. The protagonist or main character of this book is Chris Crutcher. Chris Crutcher is also the author of the book so as you can see this is a biography, or a description or story of someones life. Chris Crutcher as a child had a very bad temper. He did things like break mirrors, bump his head on the edge of the bath tub and other things to let out his temper. his parents would always keep the broken mirror to remind him of what he did was wrong. That's pretty much all I read.
C
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Blog #4
Ethan Baker-
Ethan you did a very good job with the piece of music you selected. It describes your blog very well. You made the mood of the blog very easy to understand. When you were using the very specific words i could see a picture in my mind of what you were talking about.You had very little if not any mistakes in your blog. I'm looking forward to your next blog. I might even check out the book. When you get done withthe book could you tell me so that i can check it out? Thanks.
Chardonnay Bennet-
I liked the piece of music you selected to represent your blog. It brings about a lot of emotions.It definently does a good job of explaining your blog.You also did a good job expressing you self in the blog and explaining how your piece of music connected with your book.You had some minor things that needed to be corrected in your blog like run-on sentences but overall you did well. What was the name of your blog again? I just wanted to know because it sounds pretty interesting.
Yair-Yair, you did a pretty good job. You had some minor problems but you did a good job. Your piece of music expresses the blog perfectly.It was kind of hard to fully get the full affect of what you were trying to say because of the spelling errors and the improper language. When you are writing or typing you have to make sure that you have all you're words spelled correctly and you are using correct language. Otherwise it's kind of hard for the reader to fully understand the point you are trying to get across.
Ethan you did a very good job with the piece of music you selected. It describes your blog very well. You made the mood of the blog very easy to understand. When you were using the very specific words i could see a picture in my mind of what you were talking about.You had very little if not any mistakes in your blog. I'm looking forward to your next blog. I might even check out the book. When you get done withthe book could you tell me so that i can check it out? Thanks.
Chardonnay Bennet-
I liked the piece of music you selected to represent your blog. It brings about a lot of emotions.It definently does a good job of explaining your blog.You also did a good job expressing you self in the blog and explaining how your piece of music connected with your book.You had some minor things that needed to be corrected in your blog like run-on sentences but overall you did well. What was the name of your blog again? I just wanted to know because it sounds pretty interesting.
Yair-Yair, you did a pretty good job. You had some minor problems but you did a good job. Your piece of music expresses the blog perfectly.It was kind of hard to fully get the full affect of what you were trying to say because of the spelling errors and the improper language. When you are writing or typing you have to make sure that you have all you're words spelled correctly and you are using correct language. Otherwise it's kind of hard for the reader to fully understand the point you are trying to get across.
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